I've been walking a line with these cartoons where I don't want to make excuses ("I'm just learning!" etc) but the point of the exercise is that I am learning as I go, and so I want to be honest about places I feel shaky. So, you know, Pig looks a little sadder in that second panel than I think I meant for him to. And maybe that last word balloon could be a little more interupty somehow. Maybe it should just be "Over Here!"?